You have provided a minimal analysis of your target audience and how your sequence appeals to them by stating who they are and giving some examples of how it might appeal to them.
1) Link back to the BBFC and age certificates 2) Elaborate on why this age group is suitable for your thriller sequence 3) Explain why the micro-elements will help appeal to your audience and keep them interested 4) Give more examples of how your sequence will appeal to them
You have provided a minimal analysis of your target audience and how your sequence appeals to them by stating who they are and giving some examples of how it might appeal to them.
ReplyDelete1) Link back to the BBFC and age certificates
2) Elaborate on why this age group is suitable for your thriller sequence
3) Explain why the micro-elements will help appeal to your audience and keep them interested
4) Give more examples of how your sequence will appeal to them